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I don't get the fill light of the left of the sphere. You have to apply a highlight point to the sphere in order to give to the viewer ...


There is a disproportion on the shoulders of the women, the right shoulder is larger than the left one and the legs may be larger than ...

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I don't get the fill light of the left of the sphere.
You have to apply a highlight point to the sphere in order to give to the viewer the information of from where the light is coming.
I also have to say that the sphere looks a little bit bumpy and not as smooth as it should be. I would recommend you if you want to learn about lighting to search about the film noir lighting schemes. Also if you want I can post some of my old notes for you about lighting.
Keep trying and searching about information.

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Borja Barbadillo
Artist | Student | Traditional Art
Spain
Student of first year of the BFA in fine arts and 3D animation.

Starting to live a dream an trying to don't wake up from it.

I will be trying to upload some drawings of my improvement progress.
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Vorrch Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant Student Traditional Artist
I think that the people with such talent and skills should be recognized. So keep painting 🎨, practicing and improving because that what art is about.😊
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